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Revenge On Eleanor Calder.
(9) Your story has blown my mind, not literally. Never have I ever read a story about the murder of Eleanor, and I am hooked - I've only read like 11 chapters or so. You only asked me to review like 5-10 chapters, so I did, but I will definitely have to continue reading this someday. The story line is so unique and different, and your grammar is exceptional.
I only had three problems with your story. One, was the period at the end of your title. It's a title, not a sentence; please remove it. Second, the paragraphs are hard to define, so if you could put a line of space between paragraphs such as between the two here, that would be great. And third, your chapters are short. I'm not sure if they get longer, but if not, please do so. [Link]
If you found this review to be disappointing, I'm can't say I'm sorry. As I said, I am a brutally honest person, or so people tell me. If you would like me to take this down, I will, just ask me. Don't bitch about it either; I don't care what you think, I'm just telling you what I think. Don't get mad, you asked for it. Don't rate this badly just because you don't like what I say. But on the off chance you like what I'm telling you, I'm glad you could learn something from me.
I only had three problems with your story. One, was the period at the end of your title. It's a title, not a sentence; please remove it. Second, the paragraphs are hard to define, so if you could put a line of space between paragraphs such as between the two here, that would be great. And third, your chapters are short. I'm not sure if they get longer, but if not, please do so. [Link]
If you found this review to be disappointing, I'm can't say I'm sorry. As I said, I am a brutally honest person, or so people tell me. If you would like me to take this down, I will, just ask me. Don't bitch about it either; I don't care what you think, I'm just telling you what I think. Don't get mad, you asked for it. Don't rate this badly just because you don't like what I say. But on the off chance you like what I'm telling you, I'm glad you could learn something from me.
@That_clifford_girl
Hi! I don't normally do this but I'm just gonna get right on it.
It's in my knowledge that this author isn't coming back. Which means your review isn't coming. But! I recently started up a review store so if you're interested you can link your story there.
All you have to do is click my name and follow the form. :-)
12/31/16