Fanfiction 101
Take My Heart
Take My Heart
Author: matchinghearts
Rate: Unrated
The only thing I can tell you about your story at this moment is that your grammar is great. Other than that, it’s way too early to tell where this story is going and what it’s about even. Sure, the short description says that the boys are getting a break for two years and they meet girls but you don’t know how they’ll deal with the fame, but that’s just it. I don’t know how – not yet at least.
As a reviewer, I play the part of the reader, so I don’t know how the story is going to play out, how you’ll choose to write it, how everything falls into place with however the story is supposed to go. With the few chapters you have up, I get this kind of feeling that it might be great, but even so it’s way too soon to tell.
So I know it’s been a month or so since your last update, but if you’re still around and you’re reading this review, keep on writing. Update as you can and when you’ve gone deeper into the story and you think you want a review to see how it’s going, I’ll gladly write one up for you.
If you find your review to be disappointing, I cannot honestly tell you that I’m sorry. Do not let what I say in any way discourage you from writing or anything for that matter. I am just one person with strongly opinionated views on everything. If I made it clear that I strongly dislike your story, do not think that other people won’t enjoy it. There are many other readers with different views than me who will find interest in your story where I may not have. I hope you do take something out of this and improve on and continue your writing, but if you don’t, that’s fine too.
Author: matchinghearts
Rate: Unrated
The only thing I can tell you about your story at this moment is that your grammar is great. Other than that, it’s way too early to tell where this story is going and what it’s about even. Sure, the short description says that the boys are getting a break for two years and they meet girls but you don’t know how they’ll deal with the fame, but that’s just it. I don’t know how – not yet at least.
As a reviewer, I play the part of the reader, so I don’t know how the story is going to play out, how you’ll choose to write it, how everything falls into place with however the story is supposed to go. With the few chapters you have up, I get this kind of feeling that it might be great, but even so it’s way too soon to tell.
So I know it’s been a month or so since your last update, but if you’re still around and you’re reading this review, keep on writing. Update as you can and when you’ve gone deeper into the story and you think you want a review to see how it’s going, I’ll gladly write one up for you.
If you find your review to be disappointing, I cannot honestly tell you that I’m sorry. Do not let what I say in any way discourage you from writing or anything for that matter. I am just one person with strongly opinionated views on everything. If I made it clear that I strongly dislike your story, do not think that other people won’t enjoy it. There are many other readers with different views than me who will find interest in your story where I may not have. I hope you do take something out of this and improve on and continue your writing, but if you don’t, that’s fine too.
@That_clifford_girl
Hi! I don't normally do this but I'm just gonna get right on it.
It's in my knowledge that this author isn't coming back. Which means your review isn't coming. But! I recently started up a review store so if you're interested you can link your story there.
All you have to do is click my name and follow the form. :-)
12/31/16