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The death of a broken hearted girl

Chapter 1

Hi my name is Adriana Parks, I'm 20 years old, and I'm an Guardian Angel. After my death i changed my name into Angelina Parks so i can try to kinda live a normal life as a human. But now I gonna tell you my story of how I died and meet One Direction with my new friends Selena, and Scarlett.. and, well actually, I'm Selena's Guardian Angel. Well Let's get stared.

There once was a young girl who once died of a broken heart. She tried to fix her own heart all by herself, but people kept coming in her life, and then left it broken once again.
One morning her mother went to wake her up for school, she noticed that she was so pale, and she wasn't moving at all. So she checked the pulse, but she didn't find it. she started shaking the lifeless body, to make sure it wasn't a bad dream that her beautiful daugther had died. But no reaction.

Emma's P.O.V:
I woke up by my alarm clock, It was 7.30am. I got up and went to Adriana's bedroom to wake her up. I opened the door and said " It's 7.30, get up, you need the time to get dressed. I'll drive you to school to day. Be ready about 30 minits." while opening her curtains. Iooked over to the bed to see my beautiful daugther just laying there. she wasn't moving at all. I went over to her bed and she was so plae, i checked the pulse, but there wasn't any. and she was so cold, yet is was warm in her room. I started shaking her body, but she didn't react at all. I stared crying while shaking her, checking her pulse over and over again. I even started CPR, but nothing. no reaction. she's dead. my little girl is gone.

I called 911 and the police and ambulance arrived 10minits later. The paramedics took the body of my dead little Adrianna while I was talking to the police. "We're gonna investigate the death of your daugther Adrianna, so i need to know what you did before calling 911, and what have she have been doing the last days, and where she have been." The police officer says, I just nodded.I was in shock. My Adrianna had died in the room across the hall from me through the night. why did I let this happen? why my daughter? why her? I broke down in tears, " take your time ma'am, I'll just take a look around in her room to see if there is any sign of suicide, or murder." I react at the moment i heard the word Suicide "NO, There is NOWAY she committed suicide!" The Police officer looked at me with sympathy in his eyes " With all your respect ma'am, but I'll have to ask you to leave the room." he says looking at me saldy "WHAT? This is MY house, and it was MY daugther who died, and now YOU'RE kikking me out of her bedroom!?" I screamed at the police officer. "I'm sorry ma'am, but It's rules. we have to collect evidence to find out what happend to her." He says Calmly. I sighed and went down to my living room.

It was gong to be werry quitet around here with Adrianna and John both dead. Adrianna was only child, she got no siblings before John died when Adrianna was 15, we found out he had cancer when she was 13 years old. And after his death I have been too busy to find another man, cause i was always busy with work or being home and taking care of my only daugther.
Everyone is gone now, my husband and now my daughter.
Will I have to call her school and tell them the bad new, and then I have to call in sick today. I can't go to work today, I hope my boss understands.

Notes

I know It was Short, but this is the first time I'm tryig this.. and sorry if I've been writing some words Wrong, I'm Norwegian, not English/American/Irish.
Pleas share link to my story, Rate it and comment it. Tell me what I can do better, and what you would like to happend after her meeting With One Direction. (:

Thank you!

Comments

eww what a slut sammantha
Aw, thanks! This is my first story (fanfiction) so it means alot to me that your saying that!
im just reading it just because and its actually pretty cool