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The Broken Angels

Author Note

Guys, I need some ideas on how you want the story to go, I don't want it to be really cliche and predictable, so if you've got any ideas, on what you think is gonna happen next, or if you wanna tell me what YOU want to happen next please do as soon as possible, I'll be deleting this author note soon, so give me your ideas and predictions as soon as you can, I'm trying to work on the next chapter.
-Hagar xxx

Comments

Well I think Carrie should get the message. And sort of go all law and order on the people who kidnapped Niall.
Makenzie Horan Makenzie Horan @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
7/31/13
I NEW IT!!!!!!!! I NEW IT!!
Makenzie Horan Makenzie Horan @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
7/28/13
Ciall or Narrie. You want to know what I think of Kirsten hah. I would get like arrested for what a I think of her I can't even say her name. Kirsten is probably GONNA kill him and take his money.
Makenzie Horan Makenzie Horan @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
7/28/13
  • No I didn't expect that
  • I think the men are going to somehow get the video to Carrie
  • Yes Niall better get out of it or I'll get The Rake on your butt
  • Carrie is going to find out and eventually will try to give them her money but it's not enough
  • Niall will survive or I will once again get The Rake on your butt
  • No they're not.They're going to go one by one tricking everyone he knows until they have $$
  • NOW UPDATE :D <3
i_am_fabulouis i_am_fabulouis @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
7/28/13
  • Kristen is a stupid jerk
  • She's working for The Wanted
  • Niall is in danger of being used again
  • No Niall is not going to be okay
  • Carrie is probably going to have a nerve wrecking attitude when she stops crying
  • Kristen is a gold digger
  • I ANSWERED ALL THESE QUESTIONS (: Now update -_-
i_am_fabulouis i_am_fabulouis @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
7/28/13
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