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All That Glitters - Comments

@JasperRenee
That means a lot. Thank you!

I absolutey love your characters and dialogue!

@CrumpetsAndTea

I'm so sorry for getting back to you this late but school's started and I was so busy for the past month. Anyway, we shall know more about their past as the story progresses and see how both of their personalities are shaped up by the time they've spent apart. The main reason for them being so distant is the loss of communication but that doesn't stop Faith from caring about her sister in her own way. Harry obviously has a major role but that would not be revealed till later chapters and I hope you stay tuned for that. Your reviews bring joy to me and I look forward to hear more of your thoughts!

Knowing that Hope and Faith have lived apart for a while adds a new sort of dimension to their relationship. It's obvious though that even with their time apart and feelings that may have been ill Faith still cares about her sister a lot. I'm guessing the guy we got a glimpse of is Harry? It will be interesting to see the role he plays between the two. Don't worry about catching up on your sleep, that's what summer vacation is for. The pace on this story is perfect! Amazing as always! Can't wait to read more!

For starters, I love you're writing style so much! It's so great!

I love how you make the juxtaposition of the two twins. It's really interesting to see how different their personalities are and how differently they handle grief which is something I usually don't see portrayed in fics. There's usually only one cookie cutter reaction to grief that everyone feels people should stick with.I also love how significant their names are, Hope and Faith being similar but also two very different things. I'm really interesting to see where things will go!

Until next time!

@CrumpetsAndTea
Thanks so much for leaving such kind feedback. Honestly I was a bit apprehensive that the chapter was gonna be confusing but now I don't feel so bad anymore! I can't wait to reveal what I've got in store for them as well, all in good time :)

@YouLoveWhoYouLove
I really appreciate your reading and reviewing. Thanks a lot!

Wow. Just wow. I’m hooked

This is the perfect start for a first story! You reveal just enough information to keep the reader hooked and begging for more! Also, your vocabulary and writing style is amazing! Sophisticated and elegant. I can't wait to read more about Faith and Hope and see how Harry will play into the story. Kudos!