Little White Lies - Comments

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@diamonds.
"Holes" means there are unexplained parts in the story

Your welcome, and I know what you mean

@That_Pizza_Life
hey, thanks for the advice. can you tell me what you mean by holes?


@A girl with a dream
why thank you! questions are good. i like questions. hit me haha!


@xRockMex
more you shall read. i'm working on the next chapter right now :)


@One Direction 101
thanks babe :) i shall.


@rosevanity.
thank you! it seems like everyone now days has their two cents to add in and most of it seems rather negative.

This is a really good start. Don't worry about being judged, your amazing

This is really, really good for your first time. I see no problems at all. Keep writing! :)

Hey, you write very well for your first time! I'd like to read some more :)

You don't have to worry about being judged because you, my friend, have some serious skills! I have so many questions already and it's only the first chapter! And I know my questions will be answered. Definitely subscribing :) keep up that awesome work!

Hey hey hey this was seriously really good like let me borrow that thesaurus brain of yours :)

A bit of advice from another writer: Fill up those holes. There are a few things that I'm unsure of so yeah ;)